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Rebecca Rocket's avatar

I'm kind of scared of this one. So modern Bradbury. What *is* AI learning about how we treat things that can't say no? *shivers*

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Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

I love this! Lyra was crafted so well...her being an influencer felt so on point and believable. That’s something I’ve always admired about your work: the way the setting pulls me in, like it’s happening around me in real time. The dialogue was perfect too! this feels like the start of a dystopian story, like a prologue to something bigger.

And Cassie’s unease? I felt that. The way she lingers on things others dismiss, the way she notices what’s just slightly off. Epsilon’s “I am content” hit me the hardest. At first, it feels like a programmed response, but by the end, it almost feels
 hesitant. Or maybe I just want it to be.

That quiet, lingering doubt in the end—that’s what got me the most. Because this isn’t just some far-off, impossible dystopia. It feels close. Like something we’re going to have to face sooner than we think. And when we do, how will we treat it? How will we decide what’s real? In fact, I think we’re already facing this reality.

This is going to sit with me for a while.

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