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Tori's avatar

“The boy pressed his forehead to the chain-link fence, its warm-rust biting into his skin, branding his thoughts in tiny diamonds.” - visceral and moving opening line, wow!

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Shawna Kaszer's avatar

Oh my mama heart just wants to scoop this boy up and squeeze him! Agree with another comment, that first line is gold (or diamonds?!) ✨

Loneliness dripped from this story. I wonder if this was a prevailing emotion you had for him?

Such a tender story, I love that not just the game but imagination was the powerful soul-saver. Seems effortless. Touching!

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