Itâs embedded in the tale, but I hadnât fully seen it until you said it like that. Youâre rightâthe audience is the turning point⊠most likely in all bullying stories. Youâve given me something to reflect on.
Reading your stack is going to grow me! I appreciate how you write - sharp, visual, visceral. I'm working on this! Less meandering sentences tip-toeing along over commas and semicolons because I'm breathy and long-winded and can't seem to end a thought even when I want to :D Just clean, punchy storytelling that hits hard. Respect!
Wowâfirst off, serious respect for your openness. The fact that youâre letting my writing grow on you? That says a lot about who you are. I know my style isnât for everyoneâkind of oddball, kinda jaggedâbut Iâm grateful when people give it a real shot.
A lot of it comes from screenwriting. Youâre forced to be economicalâevery beat, every pause has to earn its place. Itâs a structured, visual medium, and I think it really shaped what Iâm aiming for now⊠which is still evolving.
And for the record? I adore what you do. Your writing never struck me as long-windedâit flows, itâs well-organized, and it feels alive. For someone without a mindâs eye? Itâs kind of breathtaking.
![[ 2D ] ð€Story +ð¥Thought](https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!-C0W!,w_80,h_80,c_fill,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep,g_auto/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fffc8f383-2a73-4b6d-9de9-fc990c4c2523_1080x1080.png)
![[ 2D ] ð€Story +ð¥Thought](https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/$s_!-C0W!,w_36,h_36,c_fill,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep,g_auto/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fffc8f383-2a73-4b6d-9de9-fc990c4c2523_1080x1080.png)
Win the audience. You can't beat the bully.
Wow. Thatâs actually profound.
Itâs embedded in the tale, but I hadnât fully seen it until you said it like that. Youâre rightâthe audience is the turning point⊠most likely in all bullying stories. Youâve given me something to reflect on.
And now...
Stay tuned for The Intervener: Part II. ð
It's in the Argument/Rhetoric book. Hahaha
You can tell I havenât read it. ð
Are you going to convince me⊠or are you just gonna quote it at me until I retreat into the jungle?
Reading your stack is going to grow me! I appreciate how you write - sharp, visual, visceral. I'm working on this! Less meandering sentences tip-toeing along over commas and semicolons because I'm breathy and long-winded and can't seem to end a thought even when I want to :D Just clean, punchy storytelling that hits hard. Respect!
Wowâfirst off, serious respect for your openness. The fact that youâre letting my writing grow on you? That says a lot about who you are. I know my style isnât for everyoneâkind of oddball, kinda jaggedâbut Iâm grateful when people give it a real shot.
A lot of it comes from screenwriting. Youâre forced to be economicalâevery beat, every pause has to earn its place. Itâs a structured, visual medium, and I think it really shaped what Iâm aiming for now⊠which is still evolving.
And for the record? I adore what you do. Your writing never struck me as long-windedâit flows, itâs well-organized, and it feels alive. For someone without a mindâs eye? Itâs kind of breathtaking.
Thank you. Truly. ðð¥